<awilliam@redhat.com> said:
> Hi, guys. I've just completed the QA section for FWN. As it's my first
> shot, can people please check it over and make sure I didn't screw
> up? :) Thanks!
It flows very nicely and is very readable. I think Dale's comments are
useful and would add that it's probably best to specify dates and times
as per the style guide[1]. Apart from the large number of local
variations in how dates are written out the content is archived so it's
easier for people reading it to see 2009-02-19 than "this Thursday,
February 19th".
[1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/StyleGuide/DatesAndTimes
Thanks again for taking on this beat Adam!
Best,
--
Oisin Feeley
http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/OisinFeeley
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